Wednesday, May 21, 2014

Celeste gathers up her mirth, moves off the bed, goes to shower. The water is... tepid. Dang! Nothing works around here! & Dang that boy! Squatting elsewhere, Ravage-gorr  falls back to sleep in condemnation, his parasitic creatures hiding... as well.

6 comments:

  1. this is nice. need to B in this direction for a while... got off to a rocky opening, but then again everything after that maybe improves, oh shit What Am I writing?

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  2. STOP commenting! Those movies where the director/narrator you know tries to add his clever bs in between scenes during scenes etc.--- well, they really fucking creep me out!

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  3. ANY SORT OF NARRATION SUCKS ALWAYS UNLESS ITS ORSON WELLES. AND DUDE THIS ISN'T A LOW LIFE MOVIE! THIS IS LITERATURE!

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  4. bUT ISN'T STORY TELLING, NARRATION SORT OF? FU. THIS IS A REALITY NOVEL. THIS IS NOT A "story"... plots, charaqcter devl. shit like that makes no sense! NO MORE COMMENTS, ok? REALITY, PLEEEEEA!

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  5. MAKE NO SENSE, drop the "s" INmakes but keep the SEX, this is totally about SEXalways LAST COMMENT. wait maybe shit like that makes no sense is "proper"... LAST FUCKING COMMENT EVER (we'll see)... le marquis had his own footnotes once in a while I believe, and they didn't detract

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  6. use words like shit fuck sparingly... they're powerful words, and become silly, pointless if overused

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