Wednesday, May 21, 2014

Celeste gathers up her mirth, moves off the bed, goes to shower. The water is... tepid. Dang! Nothing works around here! & Dang that boy! Squatting elsewhere, Ravage-gorr  falls back to sleep in condemnation, his parasitic creatures hiding... as well.

4 comments:

  1. this is nice. need to B in this direction for a while... got off to a rocky opening, but then again everything after that maybe improves, oh shit What Am I writing?

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  2. STOP commenting! Those movies where the director/narrator you know tries to add his clever bs in between scenes during scenes etc.--- well, they really fucking creep me out!

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  3. ANY SORT OF NARRATION SUCKS ALWAYS UNLESS ITS ORSON WELLES. AND DUDE THIS ISN'T A LOW LIFE MOVIE! THIS IS LITERATURE!

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  4. bUT ISN'T STORY TELLING, NARRATION SORT OF? FU. THIS IS A REALITY NOVEL. THIS IS NOT A "story"... plots, charaqcter devl. shit like that makes no sense! NO MORE COMMENTS, ok? REALITY, PLEEEEEA!

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